Maui! Poem by Phats Love

Maui!

Rating: 3.1


happy valley
mango trees
sound of ukelele's
and singing
the chickens crowing
the sparring matches
iao valley
fresh water ponds
jumpin off 15ft rocks
into a small pond
the starry skies
the fresh air
the midnight breeze
sleepin in the yard
kickin it in the sun
on a old seat from a car
takamiya's market

all these things i miss, one day to return
i needed that getaway..
brought me back to simplicity! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Bird 13 August 2007

Aloha from the Big Island! You really captured it!

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David Harris 29 July 2007

Sandra, the imagery is beautiful, through your poem you took me there. A really great write. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Phats Love

Phats Love

Honolulu, Hawaii
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