May Be Retold Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

May Be Retold

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Shoot the arrow
Do not allow
Go for final kill
Carry on with mock drill

It must be your wish
Vow just fight to finish
Great wars were not won
If time was allowed to be gone

“Ride over the chance”
That shall come only once
Grab it with full force
Else whole life time you will curse

Seasons may remain unpredictable
But other roads are full of struggle
It needs valor and thrust
It has to be met with force

Make inroad up to last
Till the uncertainty disintegrates very fast
Tide has to be changed with direction
Success may smile as planned originally

I have told and definitely known
Efforts are to be made and completely owned
It needs only base with foot hold
The success story may be retold

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 December 2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 December 2013

Cliche and vague Trevor Roberts7 minutes ago Not a fan of this work

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 December 2013

Shoot the arrow Do not allow

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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