Maybe Poem by Jonathan Maldonado

In a lot of your poetry, your very pessimestic! I'd like to see you write, about happy occasions. Surely there are some good things, you can recall that would make it interesting, for the reader. It's a start, but look up and not, down! ! It takes time, but I'm betting you'll come up, with a good piece of work, real soon. Regards, Audrey Heller

Johnathan I REALLY love your work- this is spectacular and I can identify with the feelings expressed- Claudia

Liking that line Maybe, maybe's are nothing more, but flips of a coin that's some funky stuff and you're confidence is all up there, (that's a good thing.) Foreal, good choice of lines. -Fox_TaIL-

Thanks guys, and Audrey your so right thank you for bringing that up it encouraged me to start working on something upbeat ill let you know when its up id love to have your opinion on it.

Beautiful soulful write. Keep writing whenever you have spare time. Be blessed.

i like it sirr, its very good: 3

A lot of emotion and good questions. Maybe you are right but will delightfully be proved wrong. May be a spring month where you find happiness

Life is full of maybe's, nothing is certain, and this is reflected here. Good work.

I really enjoy your work. I think we have a lot of common writing views, check out my works when you get the chance.