Maybe In Some Far And Foreign Field Poem by Ben Partenay

Maybe In Some Far And Foreign Field

Rating: 5.0


Oh maybe in some far and foreign field
There sits a star that never liked the sky
That much prefers the barren soggy ground
Just as I

But here dawn breaks into a busted smile
The pastel clouds soon cover up the sun
This morning is a sad and perfect song
That’s never sung

Oh here there’s mourning in the falling rain
And in the birds that sing there soft cuckoo
And the wind will never understand this face
Nor will you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seamus O Brian 13 December 2016

The mood lifts the chin to the horizon, which carries no promise of anything to illuminate the grey within. Compelling and poignant, stirring and thoughtful. Your work is a joy to read, Ben. Thank you.

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Sandra Fowler 15 November 2006

Written from the depth of a very musical soul. Very moving, Ben. Warm regards, Sandra

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