Maybe, One Day. Poem by Jon Hark

Maybe, One Day.

Rating: 5.0


Filled me with hope
Just to tear me apart

The words she spoke
Have shattered my heart

She’s the one I need
The one I’d give anything for

Her heart is my only need
A chance is all I’m looking for

Maybe, one day, someday
She’ll love me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 11 November 2008

There is feeling in this piece, some poems go on for a long time, and yet still find it difficult to achieve what you have in just a few lines WELL DONE Love duncan X

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very true and thoughtful great job.. Krista

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