Maybe One Day I Will Be Ok Poem by Little Sunshine

Maybe One Day I Will Be Ok

Rating: 4.8


i am not ok but maybe someday i will be
when i can see you as much as i want you
and i can talk to you the way i can feel you
but my baby remember that you are the one i love
the one that makes me write
the one that makes me smile
the one that makes me cry
and the one that makes me fly
that's why i never blame you
if you leave me
if you hurt me
i love you and be sure i will always do

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nathaniel Booker 01 September 2008

All encompassing love is truly a rarity. You lay your tender heart and affection open with such bravery, even though you know that it can be hurt. The mere fact that you can do this speaks volumes about your strength and deep inner power. Excellent Poem! Be Well Little Sunshine! Nate

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Jack Tex 08 September 2008

One way love leads to the darkest of dead ends. I want to assure you that if you open your heart to love wide open, you'll see its wonders. I love your poetry.

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a nice piece! nobles sacrifices for love! ! !

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 29 April 2009

hold ur head up high my friend..u are amazing and this poem asserts it!

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Bill Thomas 30 November 2008

Excellent, beautiful, heartfelt - keep it up!

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Yasser Koor 25 October 2008

good evening nice work Hataw it is beautiful. i like your way it is lovely i never blame you.. i will always love u... good work

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Serenity Prayer 02 October 2008

wonderrful job. i can really relate. its my favorite so far. great job.

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