Me Or She? Poem by unknown poet

Me Or She?

Rating: 2.5


I loved a man long time ago
I loved him
No matter how far we are though
He loved me back
That's what I thought
I was ready to give him everything
And for his sake.. the world I faught

Six months together
I felt Like I'm gonna stay
With him forever
I loved his care
I felt him like my brother
I loved his tenderness
I felt him like a perfect lover

He was my everything
The only bright flame in my life
But now I need to know
What had changed him to a sharp knife
that cuts my heart so cruel
I really feel like i was a little fool

I really can not bare
To live without his sweetness is really unfair
How could he do that?
How could he dare?
I still love him.. yes I swear

I can not believe what he say
I just want him to stay
Just one day
I'm so lonely now
I feel so low
I really need to know
what had changed you?

I really don't know what to do?
When i see our big love is dying
Except looking at the photographs of you
To stop myself from crying

Soon you forget
The first day we met
I know she takes my place yet

But I know she don't know
How to make you happy like I do
She doesn't understand you like I do

Maybe you are close to her by your body
But your heart & mind are close to me

Please.. tell me
Now you are free
To choose me or she? !

I wish I could fly
To be with you now
And look into your eyes
And ask you
Why shouldn't we give it another try?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Micah Angelli 17 July 2018

We both have the same experience in love. Keep on writing it helps :

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Jane 92 16 December 2008

...very touching peice i hope u got an answer to the question that occupies your mind hope ur together again :)

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