Me (Senryu) Poem by Salema Khatun

Me (Senryu)

Rating: 4.1


Unconquerable
I, wonder-thought, will remain
When time die away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 16 July 2013

thought, will remain When time die away Very true. Thoughtful of thoughts.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 December 2013

Wah poetic food for thot, gud senryu poem! Pls coment my latest poem.

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 October 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Salema. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 09 January 2017

A lovely poem devoted to one's quality of self-confidence which makes him or her unconquerable. Thanks. Loved reading it.

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M Asim Nehal 09 January 2017

Profound one, A wonderful senryu.

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Richard Wlodarski 09 January 2017

Salema, after reading this poem, you've got my attention. I will attempt to learn this style. Thank you for your profound poem, and for teaching me something new.

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Stephen W 16 February 2014

Interesting. You have taught me the difference between senryu and haiku. My haiku are senryu, and so are almost all Western haiku-fakes.

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