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Mediocre Revision

With all the time
I have to prepare the submission
I can't help but think I
My own mediocre revision

All I've given
And I can't correct
Or make myself straight
Repetition
To suspect
That I won't get an A

How events replay
Falling from the middle
I never did have a peak
And still managed to dwindle
To something lesser than weak

What a way to live life...in the the eyes of defeat
Not quite okay
With what I didn't intend
Every dog has its day
And mine didn't begin
There's still so much to say
And I didn't hit send

Submitted: Tuesday, May 22, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, September 18, 2012


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  • Kaila George (7/4/2012 12:01:00 AM)

    I like this, so true when you think you have done your best only to forget to send the darn thing.

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