Mellow The Sky Poem by Fay Slimm

Mellow The Sky

Rating: 5.0


Shot-through winter sky
Bleeds, windless, with evening mist.
Kisses each distant horizon.
And I count the hours.

Showering blues descend,
Hueing low hills, lavenders
Frill the whispering trees, as closing
The light, dusk now flowers.

Calmly the night dyes
Drifting late clouds solemnly gray.
Day ends, surrounded by quiet, lying
Hushed - - dark now lowers.

Each shimmering star
Breaks silvery, gleams and shines
Across space, guiding his way, he
Appears, - - - I 'm empowered.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 04 January 2009

Winter as beauty too, written so beautifully by you Fay...

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Lynda Robson 05 January 2009

Beautifully written descriptive piece Fay, thanks for sharing this with us, 10 Lynda xx

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Linda Winchell 04 January 2009

This is a very well put piece of poetry. Bravo! Ten Miss Fay!

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Sid John Gardner. 04 January 2009

Marvellour imagry Fay.Just as if I were there too.May your artistry of painting pictures for us in words be forever. Sid.xxxx

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Kris Smith 04 January 2009

Your spirit is of natureFay, it is nature, you put in on paper in words and it comes out a picture thankyou Fay 10 +++ Chris

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Bob Blackwell 04 January 2009

Fay, I remember these sort of days, a chill in the air, but oh those clear nights. beautifully written. 10/10 Bob

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Fay Slimm

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