~~~melody Of The Empty Bottle~~~ Poem by Raju Baruah

~~~melody Of The Empty Bottle~~~

Rating: 3.0


Who cares for me now

Like the falling leaf
Like the drops of rain
Like the touch of wind

I conceived a world inside me
Some virgin moments

No illusion
No magic

Only for me
I am now what I am
Dancing in the banquet hall
With hollow perspective


Empty for others
No glass will waiting
No any moments
No bus will stop
No heart will blossom
I am Empty as I am

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 12 April 2010

amazing metaphor of self...

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Mike Carpenter 02 April 2010

and also i like the metaphors

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Mike Carpenter 02 April 2010

This is good, but it could use a little bit of work

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Raj Arumugam 21 March 2010

What an imaginative poem! Just love the original and creative approach, Raju

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Lady Grace 20 March 2010

hhhmmmmm..nice one..when ur alone and feeling lonely, just write anything n ur page, u will notice, after some drops of sweat, u can find happiness...that is poetry dear...smileeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Raju Baruah

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Jhanji, Jorhat, Assam, India
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