Memories Poem by Jahan Zeb

Memories

Rating: 3.3


Memories
How hard it is to depart,
Seeing her breathing her last,
someone whom you were a part,
In moments becomes your past,
hoping she recovers and go home,
from that dreadful deadly ailing,
How painful it is to, about, roam,
To get the divine favor and failing,
Feeling every night she calls,
sensing her soft hand on your shoulder,
making the eyes shed and the heart falls,
makes, this rain, the face colder,
But, yet o dear you live and will be there,
In my heart, to free it from every fear,

Jahanzeb

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jameel Ahmed Ansari 27 February 2012

its very good man.why did u say that it will have many mistakes..ur expressions are very elegant.

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Dave Walker 27 February 2012

A beautiful poem, like it.

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Dave Walker 27 February 2012

A beautiful poem, like it.

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So Close 15 November 2012

good job friend, some times it will make some body crying.....keep it up »so close«

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Vipins Puthooran 19 October 2012

Wow! ! ! ! 'it's an excellent poem! ! ! top marksss! ! !

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Farah Ilyas 09 June 2012

But, yet o dear you live and will be there, In my heart, to free it from every fear, i hav'nt any world 2 describe what i am feeling right now after reading this poem...amazing

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Shama Bukhari 24 March 2012

sad feelings ..........Beautiful poem..62

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Wahab Abdul 28 February 2012

A very nice poem, i like the poem very much for its content and treatment of the subject.

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Malakand Pakistan
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