! ! ! ...' Men '...Defined.. Poem by Sivan P.G Menon
! ! ! ...' Men '...Defined..
….Men defined….
Poem by Sivan PG Menon
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Infectious presence, warm... ebullient
Stocky temperament, sense of humor
Broad shoulders...a chest absorbent….
Lead, but walk aside….
Variant moods…magnanimity to own…errs
…and forgetful of the strains…
Hushed…in conflicts affectionate.......
Shield and reconcile…promises kept…
soul search the self, and define the woman….
To craft a story of co existence…ecstasy....
create HER …explore HER…Midas touch of a MAN
a blend of masculine..and feminine ….
No men and women… icons…ideal
Perceptions….. denote relationships…
Enduring…respectful, dignified... compassionate….
Obsessed to LIVE and let LIVE
More than poetic, these are very factual connotations like getting it in gist from a concised script. I personally feel that you could give more girth to the feel of the poem by rounding up your expressions for readers to form a more profound observation of your intent. Thanks for sharing. arya
man an woman are two parts of a single truth...this truth prevails as the 'half god half goddess' principle- Ardha Nari Eswara Thatwa- among Hindus… the combination becomes ideally harmonious where these two unite complimenting fully each other...even the elementary modern science admits the pre historic existence of unicellular bisexual being…good theme employed for the poem, sivan...ten votes...
This was a beautiful presentation. I hope every man listened. And every woman too. Perhaps, more important for her. GW62
Nice thought and presentation! Let us love all and serve all, helping ever and hurting never!
A severe blow of vercification.10 and more.Thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Dear Sivan P.G Menon A very Intelligent poem with soulful thoughts. Nice vercification with a good command.Thanks for sharing Greetings Satheesan Rangorath