Merciful Wind Poem by Giovanna Marasco
Merciful Wind
Green strips of paper
Float past outstretched fingertips
The wind laughs aloud
You prefer praise, Ms Hat and praise I will give. Thoroughly enjoyable. I'm rather taken with your balminess and I love the image of the wing laughing. Well done.
I think it's good as far as Haikus go, come on peole, give me some feed back here!
To cause no confusion this is a haiku, or at least an attempt at one. I have never been able to fully appreciate haikus, and I thought that I should at least experiment with the idea. Criticism and suggestions are welcome, but i would prefer praise.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 1:48:14 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I MEANT ITS SOO GOOD good rhmye