Persian Nightingale


Merry Christmas


A snowy Christmas night
The December wind blows
I fight my way homeward
Through the deep snow close


Angels who make up the Christmas missed
Mistletoes where everyone is kissed
The toys beneath the tree so tall
The sunset before the night’s fall
And
A house aglow with lights
Fade the gloom of olden nights

I can't can’t
Get you off my mind
I miss you, miss you
Most at Christmas kind

Christmas will never go away
As Your love brings the Christmas day

We have been blamed ever since the fall*!
But Christ so love you all

(2008/12/21)

*(Fall: The lapse of mankind into sinfulness because of the sin of Adam and Eve)

Submitted: Sunday, December 21, 2008
Edited: Sunday, December 28, 2008

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  • Rookie Carol Rhodes (12/23/2008 7:58:00 PM)

    If you've lucky enough to share holidays with family, yes, it is sad when the one you love won't be with you. Your poem is filled with longing and passion. Hope things turn around in your favor. A reminder, yes, for us to enjoy what we have when we have it. Tomorrow is unknown and many changes likely to come...some good and some unwanted. My best, Carol (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (12/23/2008 8:59:00 AM)

    lovely Christmas poem................. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (12/22/2008 10:22:00 PM)

    hey Merry Christmas to you and family
    love anjali
    (read mine too) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie C T Heart (12/22/2008 9:34:00 AM)

    Christmas is so blue when our love ones are so far away from us this special season.....Different Christmas poem here my friend..a 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alexander Hale (12/21/2008 11:16:00 PM)

    beautiful and sad. wonderfully written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amy (12/21/2008 4:31:00 PM)

    such a sad poem

    yet so fantastic (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Krista Churchill (12/21/2008 2:33:00 PM)

    Very sad but awesome write...

    Krista (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (12/21/2008 12:45:00 PM)

    Heartbreaking, but beautiful. Blessings to you for Christmas.

    Always your friend at poemhunter,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 123 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (12/21/2008 12:27:00 PM)

    I like your last line. Merry Christmas! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Thad Wilk (12/21/2008 11:51:00 AM)

    A lovely poem for the holiday season Shiraz! Merry Christmas to you an yours! ! *10*! !
    Best regards!
    Friend Thad (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (12/21/2008 11:36:00 AM)

    Shining Christmas congratulations Amir, deep feelings cannot hide in deep snow... Marry Christmas to you too.10x10.
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie A Poet Who Loves To Sing Alves (12/21/2008 9:25:00 AM)

    So from the heart!
    Joy!

    Please note...I will soon post my 'The Day Before The Night Before Christmas'... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Maia Padua (12/21/2008 9:18:00 AM)

    heartwarming piece...written with love and passion...written from heart....we should not anybody blame as God never blamed...For He looks what's inside your heart.....and see the humbleness inside....thanks for sharing..MERRY CHRISTMAS......and a prosperous NEW YEAR....a 10+++++ for you... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Linda Winchell (12/21/2008 8:51:00 AM)

    God or mankind does not blame humble man or women for the quality of love, but its quantity! Great write however. Linda (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarah Sisson (12/21/2008 8:26:00 AM)

    That is a warm fuzzy for sure! Thank you for this one in this Christmas season! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Fiona Davidson (12/21/2008 4:03:00 AM)

    Beautiful poetry as always...a happy Christmas to you and yours....thank you for sharing this with us...Fi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Fay Slimm (12/21/2008 3:07:00 AM)

    What an unexpected and beautiful sentiment in the last two lines of this Christmans verse - - thank you for sharing this with us - - - warmest of wishes from Fay. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Erhard Hans Josef Lang (12/21/2008 2:36:00 AM)

    Merry Christmas 2008 to you, dear poet, and many, many more to come! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vinod Kumar (12/21/2008 2:32:00 AM)

    A Very Good Seassional Treat to your special one, I like it, it`s really an amazing work Dear poet, Hats off to you, (Report) Reply

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