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Unwritten Soul


Metamorphosis/Unchanged


when the world keep spinning
when the days keep changing

everything gonna be changed
day to night
winter to autumn

when the light become dark
when the bud start blooming

everything will be different
but my friend...
there are something that never changed
and its remain unchanged...

our friendship,
loyalty,
and faith
these things never been changed
even when the world keep spinning
or when days keep changing

and the day we become older and worse,
our friendship become wiser and greater

Submitted: Wednesday, February 24, 2010
Edited: Monday, May 02, 2011

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  • Kanav Justa (12/17/2012 9:57:00 AM)

    This is one of the few poems you read. In the end you feel happy... this is something very difficult to achieve... (Report) Reply

  • Harindhar Reddy (12/3/2011 3:38:00 AM)

    Hello! Hello! Fellow poet, Dearest Soul i am in the seventh heaven that I writing my poem with poets like you - (Unwritten soul) , Vippin's, Amith Ray, Crimson Love are the star poets whose poetry impressed me hence i look for inspiration from you..........
    yet there is another poetess Jacqui broad who is my heart-mate.......

    'and the day we become older and worse,
    our friendship become wiser and greater'

    However, this poem of yours is special as it is on hot topic FRIENDSHIP. I usher all the above energetic poets to write about nature as the new is approaching.... let us all start the age of Romanticism.
    My special honest invitation to you - unwritten soul I am longing to see out and out nature poem from you... sorry to ask but i love your poems... (Report) Reply

  • Harindhar Reddy (12/3/2011 3:34:00 AM)

    Hello! Hello! Fellow poet, Dearest Soul i am in the seventh heaven that I writing my poem with poets like you - (Unwritten soul) , Vippin's, Amith Ray, Crimson Love are the poets whom i love and look for inspiration...........

    yet there is another poetess Jacqui broad who is my heart-mate........however, this poem of yours is special as it is on hot topic FRIENDSHIP. I usher all the above energetic poets to write about nature as the new is approaching.... let us all start the age of Romanticism.

    'and the day we become older and worse,
    our friendship become wiser and greater'

    My special honest invitation to you - unwritten soul I am longing to see out and out nature poem from you... sorry to ask but i love your poems... (Report) Reply

  • Dave Walker (9/30/2011 7:42:00 AM)

    Great poem my friend as always. I like
    The last four lines. Great words of wisdom. (Report) Reply

  • Lee Allen (5/1/2011 6:11:00 PM)

    great poem, love the concept.

    check out some of mine, i've just started writing. (Report) Reply

  • Terence George Craddock (7/12/2010 8:39:00 AM)

    when the light become dark
    when the bud start blooming

    your eye catches the changes I love to watch and remember within the soul (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/27/2010 10:07:00 PM)

    when the world keep spinning
    when the days keep changing

    everything gonna be changed
    day to night
    winter to autumn.yes it needs change and everything has to bechanged... nice one....10
    read mine...child.... anywhere, mary to marry (Report) Reply

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