saadat tahir

(21011965 / Islamabad-Pakistan)

Mi Estrella Brillante … 0610-2k12


(my brilliant star who is no more……a sad poem)

Life is a rainbow
With countless vibrant shades
but many to eyes hidden
toil endless with their spades

Life is a rainbow
with vibrant colors and hues
some dreams die too young
to savor the morning dews

Life is a rainbow
with merry laughs and smiles
many in darkened corners
cough on fractured tiles

Life is a rainbow
brimming with bold and young
cast over board are
so many heroes unsung

Life maybe a rainbow
And clarion, the coo of a dove
in lonesome dark skies
circles my tireless lost love


Original
06 Sep,2012
Islamabad.

Submitted: Thursday, September 06, 2012
Edited: Friday, September 07, 2012

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  • Poetheart Morgan (10/4/2012 4:19:00 PM)

    I love the swing of this poem, such as rhythmic and beautiful, not really sad I thing is gorgeous! (Report) Reply

  • Besa Dede (9/13/2012 7:04:00 PM)

    Beautiful description and melodious choice of words.
    Thank you for sharing.
    Regards,
    ~Besa (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (9/9/2012 1:27:00 PM)

    Mi Estrella Brillante or My Shining Star A reservoir filled with powerful and meaningful words along with a very rich imagery! 10+++ Your poetic talent is clearly shown in this amazing and well penned write! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City (Report) Reply

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