Mi Estrella Brillante … 0610-2k12 Poem by saadat tahir

Mi Estrella Brillante … 0610-2k12

Rating: 5.0


(my brilliant star who is no more……a sad poem)

Life is a rainbow
With countless vibrant shades
but many to eyes hidden
toil endless with their spades

Life is a rainbow
with vibrant colors and hues
some dreams die too young
to savor the morning dews

Life is a rainbow
with merry laughs and smiles
many in darkened corners
cough on fractured tiles

Life is a rainbow
brimming with bold and young
cast over board are
so many heroes unsung

Life maybe a rainbow
And clarion, the coo of a dove
in lonesome dark skies
circles my tireless lost love


Original
06 Sep,2012
Islamabad.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetheart Morgan 04 October 2012

I love the swing of this poem, such as rhythmic and beautiful, not really sad I thing is gorgeous!

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Anita Sehgal 19 September 2012

lovely...and music flows from the pen...

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Besa Dede 13 September 2012

Beautiful description and melodious choice of words. Thank you for sharing. Regards, ~Besa

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Romeo Della Valle 09 September 2012

Mi Estrella Brillante or My Shining Star A reservoir filled with powerful and meaningful words along with a very rich imagery! 10+++ Your poetic talent is clearly shown in this amazing and well penned write! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City

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