(31st August,1995)

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Mild Perfection

As I wake up to the morning light,
I think of the conversation I had at night.
And I can swear it'll never be off my mind,
These couple of days, peace shall be hard to find.
I'm not say I can't try,
And I swear when I look up and smile, I do not mean to pry.
I won't be able to forget that day,
But once this is over, I shall pray.
I'm not saying He'll hear me,
But I'm helpless and that He'll see.
I'll pray for my mind and soul to be free,
But it's His decision and He'll pass the decree.
These couple of moments I shall remember forever,
I won't be able to forget this ever!
These memories shall even last,
When this time is finally past.
And they say 'This is exactly what you shouldn't be doing! ', but its like a curse cast,
It's eating at my insides fast.
But this time I want to make it through;
Could almost swear that this time it's true.

Submitted: Tuesday, July 24, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, July 24, 2012


Poet's Notes about The Poem

8: 53am.5th July,2012. Thursday. TCF, I love you! :)

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  • Thomas A Robinson (7/26/2012 1:17:00 PM)

    Great internal conflict.Outside pressure persuading you, inside pressure
    rebelling against.Who will Ulveena be when the sun rises tomorrow.
    Another good poem that the reader is involved in.Good skills, educated, able to
    express thoughts well.

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