Mind Trap Poem by Linda Winchell

Mind Trap



I think my mind is broken?
I think my trap has sprung?
I can't keep anything in it for long,
It falls out before my thoughts begun!

I've noticed more and more these days,
That what goes in seems to all fall out!
So I've taken time to write things down,
But can't seem to find where I'd paper brought.

By: Linda Winchell

Published today 18.02

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blaine Strong 27 November 2015

Love this poem! Thanks for sharing

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Abderrahmane Dakir 09 January 2016

I like it so much. Thank you for sharing this great piece.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 20 May 2016

I can't keep anything in it for long, It falls out before my thoughts begun! So I've taken time to write things down, But can't seem to find where I'd paper brought. Beautiful description ofthe age and state of mind.. Loved the poem madam, Thanks for the sharing.10 for it. Subhas

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M. Asim Nehal 14 May 2023

I can't keep anything in it for long, It falls out before my thoughts begun! ... Excellent lines.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 November 2022

an entertaining poem with a surprising denouement,5 Stars for this amazing poem, God's Blessings in Abundance, your God's serving friend

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Khairul Ahsan 29 July 2018

Very sad to know that this was your last poem posted on this poetry site. May God rest you in peace! The title of the poem is so appropriate!

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 February 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Linda. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 January 2017

I can relate to some of the lines. Very nice n sweet poem. Thumbs up. . Pls do review my latest poem too titled 'pay a visit to a riverbank' visit

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Linda Winchell

Linda Winchell

Chicago Illinois
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