Mirage Poem by aditi ray

Mirage

Rating: 5.0


The sun melts the tar
Creating a mirage in the middle of the sea
Of traffic, on which ride in lissom waves
The snarls, the honks, and the expletives.

Thursday, June 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: city,desert,mirage,sea,summer,sun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 13 February 2020

The snarls, the honks, and the expletives. very fine poem Mirage. lovely. tony

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 November 2018

nice short and sweet do also read my poetry LIFE IS A MIRAGE ONLY U MAY LIKE IT

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Chinedu Dike 22 June 2018

Well conceived and elegantly encapsulated with insight. A nice creation. Thanks for sharing Ray.

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U live Gavald 21 June 2018

W..h..o..re dod die today

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