(Ageless / Dominican Republic)

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Miss Missing You

The Moon is the same Moon
And so are the Stars and Sun
But throughout time,
The wind of changes
Has taken different directions
After touching our lives
And leaving behind
Nothing but just memories...

Our once great and passionate love
Became like a dead rose
Colorless and without scent,
Deception has been exposed
And boundaries clearly delineated
For there is not reasons at all
To keep this rocking union alive
When trust has been bridged…

Now, thanking you for helping me grow
By coming through my life,
I wholeheartedly wish you good luck
In your new adventures
Feeling sorry for those
Who may come across your path…

Hoping that the day will come soon
When this painful agony will stop
Once and for all..
The day I finally will be free
And I start miss missing you...


©All Rights Reserved-2012

Submitted: Saturday, June 30, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, October 30, 2012


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  • The Reader (7/1/2012 1:07:00 PM)

    Exactly upto wordsworth's poetic diction, effectively simple, the voice of every heart, and within the reach even of a layman.

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  • Valerie Dohren (7/1/2012 10:51:00 AM)

    Very beautiful and heartfelt poem.

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  • Heather Wilson (7/1/2012 2:30:00 AM)

    A heartfelt poem, full of hope and freedom from a love that was never meant to be. a beautiful write as always.

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  • Hari Smith Holms (6/30/2012 11:39:00 PM)

    Of course, the day will come when there will be no air of misunderstanding.Terrific job as usual.

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