Missing Poem by Ambler Sane

Missing

Rating: 4.8


Under the light, sitting on a chair,
I felt something is missing, its not there.
Hard to express, because words aren't fair,
I cant even cry, I wont share.
I hope you understand not just stare,
Its like Hopelessness saying to me' I'm not going anywhere'.
look all around, people are there,
but you are in abyss, so they cant hear.
You behave like others don't care,
They have their own life, struggle and despair.
I hope Love would get me, Because love is full of claire.

Saturday, July 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: confusion,loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 25 July 2015

A heartfelt portrayal of hopelessness, no one able to hear your cry for help because of their own struggles and despair. Yet, you still hold on to the belief that hope will come to you through love. A poignant expression of abandonment waiting for the hope of love to save you. Has a great rhythm throughout the poem, keeps the words flowing easily. An excellent and well written poem Ambler! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Chinedu Dike 19 July 2015

A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned from the heart with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 11 July 2015

Nicely written, Ambler

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 11 July 2015

i hope love would get me, Because love is full of claire...i love this line. Thanks for sharing.

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