Mist Drowned Lives Poem by Terence George Craddock

Mist Drowned Lives

Rating: 5.0


in chill mist of morning
in sad lament at close of day
ghosts tug at strung heart strings
flotsam washed in out upon moon tides

ebb flow carries dross tragic drownings
tears shed untimely water taken lives
smoky mist rises funeral pyre ties
sea tongue foggy swallows


Copyright © Terence George Craddock

Tuesday, April 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written in April 2015 on the 13.4.2015.
Inspired by the poem 'Misty Morning Fog' by Loyd C. Taylor.
Dedicated to the poet Loyd C. Taylor.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 14 April 2015

The privilege is mine my friend, without your poem mine would not have been written, and I would have missed out on the fun and the friendship, and I liked this poem your words inspired :)

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 14 April 2015

Terry, my good friend, you have a very interesting and unique form of writing. I truly enjoyed this piece. I am happy you found inspiration from my poem. Thank you for the dedication. Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.

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