Mistress Of Lies Poem by T.James Becker

This is a brilliant composition. You had me captivated from the word go. Love the way you described her.10/10

A lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

Hey, this is a new step toward more pleasure for those of us who love to read the images created by words! No doubt, you are a poet. Looking forward to more of your works. Thank you for sharing. A well-done production! Carol

Wow I love this poem it's really well written and i love the words you use in it!

I know there are always two sides to a story & yours poet friend is rather gory. This beautiful woman I do not know, but from your description, I dislike her so! A brilliantly written tale of the painful side of love which could not last 10

Very dramatic poem. Great.

Tj, had to read again. This is truly beautifully written. You did it all: brought us into your inner self in such a way, using your words so deftly to describe your anguish and overwhelming disappointment and confusion re love, as to allow the reader to fully connect with you and ourselves. Yes, as all have said, you are a poet. Thank you! Carol

stunning piece....not a line wasted...fantastic poem you have here

Wow! ! ! Your emotions must be in tune with the theme itself. This is like a Shakespearean kind of lament. Good work T. J. Your journey to a poet's legacy is now on track.

Briliantly Written, T J you have a gifted talent for poetry