Mistrusted Smiles Poem by Mohammed Balchi

Mistrusted Smiles

Rating: 5.0


As the days pass on me with smiles
Now we days are comprised of the sun and me
Standing for each one defended by Giles
On nothing we did disagree

But the zone was free for the night
Where it an intruder in our sky
It came and stole the light
we buried the day and off I waited to die

But night was their beside me and left the zone
and woke up people when my friend shone
as i forgot my friend and our boss
and i disregarded the loss

And the doors he closed on me
and the opening of the doors of my eyes
the heart no longer reached the sea
but disown their dyes was the transformation of mistrusted smiles

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 12 July 2009

nice extended metaphor: ''and the opening of the doors of my eyes the heart no longer reached the sea'' wonderful poem..10+ from me

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