Mock Orange Poem by Louise Gluck

Mock Orange

Rating: 4.7


It is not the moon, I tell you.
It is these flowers
lighting the yard.

I hate them.
I hate them as I hate sex,
the man's mouth
sealing my mouth, the man's
paralyzing body—

and the cry that always escapes,
the low, humiliating
premise of union—

In my mind tonight
I hear the question and pursuing answer
fused in one sound
that mounts and mounts and then
is split into the old selves,
the tired antagonisms. Do you see?
We were made fools of.
And the scent of mock orange
drifts through the window.

How can I rest?
How can I be content
when there is still
that odor in the world?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
P A Noushad 16 October 2020

Great ideas I experience from this very small poem my dear friend Louise Gluck.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 October 2020

How can I rest? How can I be content when there is still that odor in the world? //Happiness and natural desire of life all are in the loving fragrance that agitates the inner soul; lovely poem penned

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M Asim Nehal 27 November 2016

This is fantastic poem...10++

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Fred Gerke 13 April 2022

Why?

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 July 2020

I hate them. I hate them as I hate, the man's mouth sealing my mouth, the man's paralyzing body very good poem facts of life. tony

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Chinedu Dike 14 April 2022

Insightful and brilliant lines

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Brook Renwick 13 April 2022

Each to their own I say! Personally I enjoy it but at a deeper level I really don't know why I enjoy it. I am driven by my libido that's all I know.

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T.R. James Bray 13 April 2022

Well done! What a great take on , love the scents I felt like I could almost smell them.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 April 2022

Excellent honest poem based upon the reality of everyday. Enjoyed much!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 April 2022

Well, what odor? The smell of war or the masculinity she can't stand? A real 'guess-what-where' is this simple poem. Still a 5 Star full score! I really enjoyed this 'guess it' poem.

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