Mocking Moon Poem by Javier Falcon

Mocking Moon



Oh why moon do you mock me,
up so high and far away,
bickering all night with your friends,
shining down on my lonely array,
but one day moon I will laugh,
as all your friends I will no longer see,
as far out of this world I will go,
into a place where your shine,
won't ever get to me.

Far far ever far from here,
a place where she waits,
a place where the stars shine,
ever so more brightly than here,
and all of them will be mine,
as jealous I am not of what you have,
just envious of what I can not.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cassandra Jasmine 20 August 2013

Beautifully written; I love the phrasing, the way you use the words, and the strong structure. Bravado! I also feel how sometimes the moon might tease us humans. My only concern is the capital letters; but that's just a trifle little thing. Again, beautiful writing. Keep it up! ;) Cassandra Jasmine

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Javier Falcon

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