breeanna mcelmurry

Rookie (july 24 1994)

Mom


Mom your one that walks tourgh pain with me
The one that never gaves up.
your The one that stays up with you when you and your boyfriend breaks up.
The one that makes you feel best at your worst.
the one that stays at your side at your worst.
mom the one that is there when ur dad is not and when he is.

To my mom

I love you

Submitted: Monday, March 16, 2009
Edited: Thursday, February 24, 2011

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  • Rookie Alex Gomez (3/21/2009 8:24:00 PM)

    Very nice representation of your mother. I hope you love your mother always. My mom passed away last year. The only thing I'd do is possibly expand your vocabulary and fix a few spelling errors, but good poem nonetheless! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (3/19/2009 3:07:00 PM)

    I feel about this, the way I did the first one. Too emotional to forget. a real
    treasure to read and day of the week.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

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