Money And Honey Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Money And Honey

Rating: 5.0


Sweet heart I have kicked the money,
My journey from money to honey!
Creeping lips! Yes, feet to pony!
Throughout it's honey abundant and tony,
Forget past strains and get rid of stress,
Tonight I want a smiling yes! Yes, only yes,
Yes, yes, yes nothing less than yes,
Once more your yes, I have seen your yes,
Your eyes say yes, yes it is yes! A real yes!

Tuesday, November 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: kiss
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The story is universal. I have used the words Creeping Lips as a symbol of love that gradually creeps up and is spread all over the body remaining centralized in the soul. I would have used the word crawling instead of creeping and might have been beautiful but as it was not at all the oral sex I avoided it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salini Nair 21 November 2014

nice poem...enjoyed reading

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Valsa George 19 November 2014

So now you have shifted your allegiance from money to honey! A wise choice.... money alone can never satisfy us! We learn it from experience! Enjoyed!

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Khalida Bano Ali 18 November 2014

Romantic and beautiful and thoughtful, sacrifice of money for a true love.

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