Jesus James Llorico


Moon - Poem by Jesus James Llorico

The moon grasped my heart tonight!
Like the glow of a burning lamp
It gleams in a mantle of delight
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Comments about Moon by Jesus James Llorico

  • Rookie - 0 Points Geetima Baruah Sarma (10/6/2013 5:09:00 AM)

    A lovely verse, so nice to read! (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,453 Points Jesus James Llorico (7/4/2013 11:42:00 AM)

    Thank you Sandi for a very nice comment, I really appreciate it very much. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 121 Points Sj Holland (7/3/2013 4:54:00 PM)

    Your verse grabbed me with the first line, and captured my breath:
    The moon grasped my heart tonight! ...

    And I almost held my breath through the whole poem. You write so beautifully. How did you learn to pen such lovely verse? (Report) Reply








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