Moon, Come And Bathe Me Poem by Dr. Antony Theodore

Moon, Come And Bathe Me

Rating: 5.0


Love flows with perfect grace
like the dove that wants to fly.

I remember her embrace.

Hold me my desire oh my heart!

Moon, come and bathe me,
caress me.

As the feathers of a wing
cuddle together,
I want to cuddle with you
and gaze at your face
with golden light
shining in my eyes.

Moon,    Come And Bathe Me
Tuesday, September 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: passion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 02 November 2018

This is a beautiful poem on love with moon having touching expression and nice diction. I appreciate the way of presentation. Thank you dear Dr.tony. Full vote.

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 September 2015

There is a coma after Moon. please read it that way as an imperative. Moon, Come and bathe me. i thank you my Poet friends, who tell me about my mistakes and praise me for the poem. with a humble heart i accept all your criticism. God bless you all. tony

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David Wood 08 September 2015

A very lovely and romantic poem, I love the use of language, good and descriptive, excellent work. A worthy 10

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 08 September 2015

Moon come and bathe with me.... such a beautiful line. Love shows every thing including nature in a new light. Loved this..

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 08 September 2015

With golden light.... much fascinating and interesting poem too.

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