nimal dunuhinga

Rookie - 145 Points (19, April,1951 / kalubovila East, Sri Lanka)

*moon Rapes His Sister Sun - Poem by nimal dunuhinga

In the pitch darkness strange things can happen;
But unfortunately nowadays it happens in the daylight too.

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Comments about *moon Rapes His Sister Sun by nimal dunuhinga

  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (2/27/2010 11:55:00 AM)

    Uncontrolled and unguided gratification …psychopaths are in plenty…
    Excellent Caption...congrat…
    10+
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

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  • Ken E Hall (2/9/2010 3:13:00 AM)

    The brevity of the poem speaks out loud and clear
    worthy of top marks..
    regards (Report) Reply

  • Pradyumna Jyotir (1/28/2010 12:40:00 AM)

    So much conveyed with so little. A poem very well crafted.The brevity is dynamic as it is powerful. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Sally Plumb Plumb (12/13/2009 1:54:00 AM)

    I don't know how to reply to this one.More food for thought. (Report) Reply

  • Rosa Banks (11/29/2009 4:54:00 PM)

    wow no dur things can happen in the dark but ok good i guess it gets strait to the point good try! (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/5/2009 6:41:00 PM)

    In the pitch darkness strange things can happen... and donot get suprised over it... many things happen in dark nights.... beautifully crafted poem...

    read mine dead nights, go to hell and you go alone (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq Ashraful Musaddeq (5/27/2009 8:37:00 PM)

    Wonderful 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Dr Hitesh Sheth (4/7/2009 9:08:00 AM)

    few lines tell the characteristric of modern age.............. (Report) Reply

  • Anjali Sinha (2/9/2009 11:56:00 AM)

    amazing---
    the narration of the tragedy
    in just a few lines

    +++10 anjali (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq Ashraful Musaddeq (10/27/2008 10:03:00 PM)

    It's amazing, love it with 10. (Report) Reply

  • Greenwolfe 1962 (8/14/2008 5:19:00 PM)

    I read this and I suppose it is the opening to something. I gave it a 5.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Duncan Wyllie (7/16/2008 4:50:00 PM)

    Too true, we would hope that in the daylight, those doing the harm would see what they were doing and! STOP!

    Love duncan X (Report) Reply

  • Dr. Kolitha Lelwala (7/15/2008 9:01:00 AM)

    nice poem. very well done.
    Kolitha (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Fowler (7/11/2008 9:37:00 PM)

    Very thought provoking. It is true that terrible things can happen in daylight
    as well as in darkness. Ten for this.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply










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