Moral Philosophy Poem by Jhonny Thermidor

Moral Philosophy

Rating: 4.8


From the Freedom Tower located nearby,
To the sparkling stars beneath the sky,
A new, moral philosophy rises,
Too Intricate to be seen at naked eyes.

I just hope you already had a clue.
No matter the aspect of life you get into,
Unless, of course, money has no value,
The truth is believed not to be fully true.

Indeed, justice should be evenly distributed.
Like the Citadelle Laferriere, it is exploited.
It is as famous as the Eiffel Tower in Paris.
But, its survivors remain wealthy and callous.

Sophisticated Weapons are conveying humanity.
Day and night have a common affinity,
Strenuous activities require almost no sleep
Which is apparently no longer in need.

To be elected to preserve the future of a nation,
A man is struggling to prove himself an asset.
However, as his dream reached its destination,
He ignores that his promises were a huge debt!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brittany graviet 13 September 2008

very inspiring, maybe change the last line in the first verse to make it fit a bit better though.

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Evaughn Gray 21 August 2008

wow...Jhonny that was a really reall good poem i loved it, i love the way it rhymes: D ~Hazel G.E

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