More Bliss... Poem by Akhila Viswambharan

More Bliss...

Rating: 5.0


There's moonlight on us,
On the sandy beach,
Music blending behind in the sea!
Here I am, you with me,
Would you take a tight hug
And a warm kiss?
While you melt me like chocolate,
And I snuggle in your arms,
Lets stay like that forever,
With the wind in our ears,
Cold waves at our feet,
With us in eternity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shekhar Joshi 03 May 2009

sweet, lovely poem. i liked it good work

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 30 April 2009

I think the title should be Ultimate bliss? ..........................Good Write...........

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Kesav Easwaran 28 April 2009

good love poem...words warm and expressive...thanks, Akhi...10

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Kee Thampi 27 April 2009

beyond all flight With the wind in our ears, Cold waves at our feet, With us in eternity.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 27 April 2009

i c u in this poem and u are amazing!

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