More Or Less..... [my Response To Greg Davidson's Poem; Tweeting; Very Short] Poem by Bri Edwards

More Or Less..... [my Response To Greg Davidson's Poem; Tweeting; Very Short]

Rating: 5.0


Less CAN be more, more CAN be less.
I'm not a Tweeter I confess.
I think I can make 140 do the trick,
but, to repeat: tweeting ain't my schtick.

Tuesday, April 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: writing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
PH member Greg Davidson's poem 'Poem: In 140 Characters' gave me inspiration to write this. Thanks Greg. it ISN'T easy (for me) to keep track of the number of characters i type; maybe that is why this comment is longer than the poem. but don't ask how many characters longer it is! bri :)

Poem: In 140 Characters

There’s a thing has me really beat.
How can those who like to tweet,
Their thoughts adequately express,
In a hundred and forty characters or le

Greg Davidson
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 17 January 2018

I am glad that you made it short Any longer and I'll abort Your response to 'more or less' Kind of you to make it less Thanks Bri

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Shahzia Batool 30 April 2014

Bri, Your poetry is like a scene of a dramatic relief in a bitter tragedy...and you have got your own way in witty wordplay!

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