Morning Train Is On Right Track Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Morning Train Is On Right Track

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From far dwelling light is visible
Train is rightly coming on track
Blowing horn train is giving alert
Station man is giving signal sure.

Many passengers are travelling
All are eager to reach destination
Early morning time train is giving
Fresh tune to have perception here.

Many are gossiping inside nicely
While new station is arriving
Few of them are going away sure
There is no chance of meeting again.

Very pleasant this train journey is
We gather and together gossip more
In own, own station we separate
We do never meet again in lifetime.

Friday, November 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: journey,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 27 November 2015

Casual riders, Well described, Life in motion, Train does ride. Liked your very natural and well conceived train ride.

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Dogma Daniman 17 October 2020

Emotional train moves ahead with wonderful passengers. This poem is very interesting.

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Salini Nair 28 November 2015

closely related to life..nice sir

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Akhtar Jawad 27 November 2015

An amazing metamorphic poem, beautiful.

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Kelly Kurt 27 November 2015

literal or metaphorical, a nice write

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Shah Surja 27 November 2015

Beautiful........ poem (y)

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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