Morning Watch Poem by Michael Pruchnicki

Morning Watch

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The morning watch begins early
with coffee and a smoke topside.
Four o'clock on the ninth day
of November-
first morning of our last voyage before lay-up.

Soon the fog lifts to reveal
rust-orange deck plates
and coiled hawsers like snakes
writhing lazily around bollards.
Ruby-red first light glows
on pilothouse.

Throbbing engines below decks pound
and pulse like a beating heart.

Then we sail into deep dark water.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Midnight Clarity 04 February 2008

Vivid, strong colour use. Crisp ending. thank you.

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Tom J. Mariani 04 February 2008

You reference Dickinson in your poem about poetry. This peom reminds me of her (265) The Sailor cannot see the North- but knows the needle can- Tom

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