Dr Hitesh Sheth

Rookie - 7 Points (Birth Place: Earth)

Mosquito's Feast - Poem by Dr Hitesh Sheth

A humming mosquito said: gun, gun, gun,
For greatest ever feast come, come, come.
Party area is a house of SHETH,
And venue is his lush dark pate.
Angelic Anopheles and Cute Culex* are special guests,
And black trouser is place for rest.
Special item is blood of HITESH,
Our greatest enemy, whom I detest.
Coil, Net and Mat may prove hitch,
But, 'Arise, awake and stop not till goal is reached.'**
Please keep your children at bay,
From a newest mosquito killer spray.
With God’s grace destroy devilish plan,
And with malaria wipe out evil human clan.

*Anopheles and Culex are species of mosquito
**Arise, awake and stop not till goal is reached-Saying of Swami Vivekananda.

Dr Hitesh C Sheth


Comments about Mosquito's Feast by Dr Hitesh Sheth

  • Rookie - 184 Points Brian Jani (6/28/2014 4:13:00 PM)

    Simply amazing piece of poetry.bravo! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (6/14/2009 3:41:00 PM)

    that was a very beautiful and well expressed poem..10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (5/26/2009 3:38:00 AM)

    wow that was amazing..I can realy feel the pain..bit like Mosquito's karate..
    true indeed, we have to fight like bruice Lee (chatas patas) ..to send them away..
    10++ thank god there is no mosqutos in my place (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Richard Dates (5/2/2009 12:21:00 AM)

    A great poem and a unique and original topic. I would suggest you work a bit on the smoothness of the poem. It already very good...it could be great. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather S (3/26/2009 10:36:00 PM)

    i like the uniqe topic you choose and how you used your name in this one
    great write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! (12/21/2008 1:33:00 AM)

    what a mosquito poem......and there theme of working is great...the words of swami.wow........

    great thoughts dear.......
    nice imagination....and mosquitos are planning to attack the doc......wow...what a brave work dear! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 28, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 26, 2009

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