SALINI NAIR

Gold Star - 6,674 Points (2/2/1981 / kottayam)

Moss - Poem by SALINI NAIR

Mosses are on the way
Flourished to be so long
Green to the extremity
So charmed by lovely dawn
Dews rest on its spongy cot

Proximity is so slippery
Yet it's the glee of the moment
Fall may stretch to some unknown measures
As it meant on that style
So laudable all its way

Evictions are temporary
Widen dews apart its shine
When rays roll its splendid coax
Take a rather adieu for the time
But there leave some ashes of its life

Life will pursue a lovely row
Some shades slip and rest on skew
Some colors may lure some way
But drop of life may be on its way
Life is like a dew of the day….

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Comments about Moss by SALINI NAIR

  • Gold Star - 16,632 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (7/1/2014 12:28:00 PM)

    Strong metaphor on life very beautifully narrated with regard to mosses and dews how reflective on life..........
    simply brilliant.................. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 24,732 Points Valsa George (6/26/2014 11:11:00 PM)

    Life is like dew of the day.. to be precise like the dew of the morning! It may sparkle for sometime.. sometimes it may not be noticed even... Any way it disappears in no time! Enjoyed the poem Salini ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,138 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (6/25/2014 9:48:00 AM)

    Life and its explanations and such things beautifully created a nice poem. Frankly speaking it will take to understand the meanings in detail and may be such different meanings and interpretations to the word power in the poem which in the whole have such goodness of thought. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 25, 2014



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