Moth Song Poem by shel cope

Moth Song

Rating: 5.0


Space curves
around a flame
is all we know.
Shine on.

With luck
its quick,
a flash,
crackle,
a sigh, and
gone.

Watching smoke
meandering,
wondering.

While you shine, shine, shine, on

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roger Cornish 22 March 2008

Concise - precise no need to revise! 10! love the economy.... l; ove the idea! R.

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Original Unknown Girl 11 March 2008

Beautiful......(and who said moths were ugly?) ... Sigh! HG: -) xx

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