! ! Mother Earth Poem by Rema Prasanaa

! ! Mother Earth

Rating: 2.8


I want to stop you my child
from all that you are doing
mother, I am for you and those around
the pathway in front of you was bright
but you walked back
blind fold in darkness.
your vision distorted,
mind maddened
to revolve on a wild orbit
you walked away from me
and my caring embrace

I bestowed you with all my love
and my treasures so vast
but for my love
as a reward, you smeared me in blood
terrorized me, thrashed me and
on that uneven terror field
buried your self.
it is not too late you understand,
the courage and strength in you is
not for all this.

Before my tears form an ocean,
before my anger burns on fire
stop all this for you my dear
don't paint your future black
and leave behind bloodstains
as a memoir of your life

Not again my dear......
stop all this forever or sure
I will break my silence
and for certain, you cannot
resist me or my supreme power
with all your expensive weapons
I hope my child, you comprehend
and obey your mother......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta Agarwal 02 September 2008

a timely warning, well composed 10

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Indira Renganathan 14 August 2008

Nice verses.10 and more for the good subject.Thanks for sharing

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Ian Bowen 24 July 2008

Rema, well written piece with bags of good advice. Ian

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Kyle Shield Laster 12 July 2008

that's exactly what she'd say. very convicting. great write! !

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Chitra - 24 June 2008

wonderful depiction you have epitomized nature's warning so very well

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