Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 72 Points (June 5th / Palghat- Kerala- India)

Mother's Gift


I look upon this summer sky
A night so dark and bright!
Wanders a thought eleventh May
Mother’s day in my mind

Years now her I lost since
Mother my so dear
Stare my eyes the sky above
A thousand stars alight!

Among the glow and glitter there
One star I find differs
That sends down cool and loving gaze;
Feel whispers soothing words

The love and care so missing long
Drift on me through air
I get a gift on Mother’s Day!
My mother right up there!

Submitted: Sunday, May 11, 2008
Edited: Friday, September 26, 2008

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  • Rookie Prerna Chikersal (1/20/2010 1:01:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem indeed! Mother's are very precious. Their presence in life is indispensible no matter how old you are.....
    Great work! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Akram Awadat (5/25/2009 5:37:00 AM)

    very bueatiful lines, deep meaning,
    i like it, thanks a lot (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (5/17/2009 10:02:00 PM)

    lovely write sir..i got to this poem a little late...it reminds me of tagore's poem...one in which he sees his mom in the meadows (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 127 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (5/11/2009 1:59:00 AM)

    very beautiful.. i just she cried in heaven when you completed this... beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Merna Ibrahim (5/8/2009 12:50:00 PM)

    Great poem Kesav, you wrote it from your heart..it's so obvious....lovely to read..Merna (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Forever and always (5/8/2009 5:20:00 AM)

    you were right i did enjoy it.... thankyou.... So beautiful and decriptive it was lovely... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (5/6/2009 1:35:00 AM)

    This is such an inspirational poem Kesav. To know her love reflects right back to you from above.
    The one star that differs and send you her special love. Beautiful words for a beautifully Mother.
    Karin Anderson 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 47 Points Meggie Gultiano (5/2/2009 9:53:00 PM)

    Among the glow and glitter there
    One star I find differs
    That sends down cool and loving gaze;
    Feel whispers soothing words

    I find this very touching and it pulls my heart string. As i can also relate to this, ..sometimes, i look up to the sky, pretending that one of the stars there is my mother looking down at me whispering words that puts me to sleep in peace..Thanks for this sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (4/7/2009 2:03:00 AM)

    a truely excellent write..brought back memories of my mother who too should be there....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Martyres (3/31/2009 11:22:00 PM)

    Kesav- a truly beautiful poetic tribute to your dear Mother....I enjoy reading your poems.....you are indeed gifted.10+++
    I also want to thank you for all the kind comments that you have been posting on my work... I am deeply encouraged to keep writing..when I hear from you..
    Kind regards
    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ahmad Shiddiqi (11/25/2008 12:00:00 PM)

    we love and care for mothers. very well done! keep writing! could you comment on mine too? thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points C.R. Clark (11/22/2008 4:51:00 AM)

    A beautiful tribute to a very special lady.Mothers are most surely God's special gift to their children. Thank you, my friend.
    Richard (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sumita Datta (11/2/2008 2:31:00 AM)

    Mother is always diefferent than all other.... good piece of work... :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Yasser Koor (10/25/2008 2:51:00 AM)

    ooooh it is lovely and great poem
    it impressed in my heart i like it
    the heaven under mother's feet
    well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie C T Heart (9/26/2008 12:43:00 PM)

    A thoughtful son's loving composition...touched my heart for this...This is priceless and no rate could match to...I'll just give u a kiss. Lol! ! ! ! joke. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 213 Points Palas Kumar Ray (7/28/2008 4:50:00 AM)

    ____________________your poem brings tears in my eyes______________
    _______________________________________________________________
    _______________________and no marks for this_____________________10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 317 Points Subbaraman N V (6/10/2008 12:37:00 AM)

    To me she continues to send her gifts from her heavenly aboard! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 876 Points Sadiqullah Khan (5/26/2008 12:03:00 AM)

    great feeling for 'love lost' but again she is up in the skies...i like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Dipika P (5/22/2008 6:22:00 AM)

    ial say in one word..'awesome' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rema Prasanna (5/20/2008 5:07:00 AM)

    brilliant poem, love of mother is unique and the rest in those expressive lines, great work (Report) Reply

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