Vivek Tiwari

Rookie - 98 Points (23 July 1985 / Gaura (R.S.) Pratapgarh)

Mother-The Eternal Goddess - Poem by Vivek Tiwari

None can take the place of Mom
That loving and fond hands
That very soothing and that very calm,
That very love of feeding
That very care full of charm,
She knows your heart
She knows your feelings
She reads your emotions
And all mutual dealing.
She is the Goddess
The sole Eternal
A shade of comfort
Is the love matrnal;
When you've a bruished heart
She is the doctor
She is the balm
When you have a pining brain
She is the peace
She is the calm;
She holds your fingers
To help you walk
She keeps you guiding
And helps you stand upon the rock;
I love you mom
I miss you a lot
Mom keep your fond hands
Upon my head
Give me comfort Mom
Of your soothing lap
Keep me forever
Close to your heart
Love you mom
I love you a lot!
I miss you Mom
I miss you a lot!

Vivek Tiwari
23/11/2012

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This poem is dedicated to my Mom- my sweet Mom.

Comments about Mother-The Eternal Goddess by Vivek Tiwari

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (8/11/2013 4:15:00 AM)

    mother- the eternal goddess, mother is a god of sacrifice she always think of her child first and then she has to think as a wife and then as a woman which is really a amazing, a mother should be worshiped by their children since we owe her so much and more

    the piece speaks every aspect of love for you mother sir bravo.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 23, 2012



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