Moths Poem by Herbert Nehrlich

Moths

Rating: 3.5


Flutter, flutter
on the window,
letters will arrive so soon,
Bringing news
of loved Berliners
this is war,
we love the moon.

Morning spat
into the mist,
wings long gone
windows kissed.

Smudges attract
moths just like light,
eat of our thoughts,
spawn a new blight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Herbert Nehrlich1 15 October 2005

Yes, Lamont you are right. It was actually a bit of emotion misdirected at you. I try to either keep a civil tongue or hold it altogether. Best H

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 15 October 2005

very ethereal...I like the symbolism.

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Raynette Eitel 15 October 2005

I like this poem a lot, Herbert, but in the second stanza, last line, I would leave off the word 'was..' The meter would be better there, I think. Raynette

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