Mould Poem by Varsha M

Mould

Rating: 4.7


I wish I had given her
My kind of observance
Towards all pleasant things
Towards all things I liked
Amulgamating all the positive
I wish I had instilled this kind of essence
Towards all pleasant things
Towards all things I liked
Conjoining the banks of river
With the water that kisses forever
Never abandoning even for once
Like salt to taste
And air to breath
And honey to health.

Life is all about living
Finding ways of achieving
Dreaming big as I can create
All because it's my life
All because it's my pleasure.

Mould
Wednesday, September 16, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: thought
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This section is part of poem of Ravindra Kumar Soni Indifference. Though what he presented there is apt and very well brought forward, I tried to give a different look to it. Hope the poet doesn't mind. I named it mould because I feel we can mould with a good intentions and perspectives.
I wrote it with concept of a mould but when reviewed it again I felt like adding the refrain.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravinder Kumar Soni 11 February 2021

A great work.

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M Asim Nehal 16 September 2020

Joy to read such poems.5 Stars Life is all about living Finding ways of achieving

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M Asim Nehal 16 September 2020

Under new rating system 5 stars for you for this wow poem

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M Asim Nehal 16 September 2020

Excellent poem nicely written.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 16 September 2020

Its been moulded into nice poem. Well done

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