Moves Poem by aryaindia india

Moves

Rating: 5.0


They just bring closer
No one's the loser
Just censor with razor
Comments that are laced

They carry with speed
Knowing the other's need
Some message to feed
The mind that is graced

They set their own trend
Some feelings to lend
A grazed heart to mend
The soul that is raised

They succeed in spinning
The thoughts that are reeling
To dole out the feeling
That finds peace that's faced

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 28 November 2009

grazing moves of the souls...with lacing thoughts on the inner green grassy meadows...graceful words Arya...liked a lot...10

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Catrina Heart 27 November 2009

They set their own trend Some feelings to lend A grazed heart to mend The soul that is raised --- a nice moved of life's game...........

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