Moving South Poem by Melanie Emikohe

Moving South



Let's get married and move South,
where stereos still play the Beatles.
I'll take this old acoustic guitar
made in 1970, scruffy and out of tune.

I will strum and you will sing
as we stop by old Spanish streets
where sad people go to find a lover;
if lucky we will make some pennies.

C'mon now, while the dollar's low
so we can save a little to buy us
some mango pies at the bus station
and a tabloid to keep us entertained.

Let's leave the city and the memories
of bootless men at the sidewalks
or the friendly girls who work at night.
Here, you can fold my shirts for me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Davency Leroy 11 October 2006

youre truly, amazingly talented

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Joseph Daly 08 October 2006

This narrative is excellent. It has that 20th Century classic feel to it. In one sense it sounds like a beat poem but structurally it is more than that. The language is great: laid back conversational, driving the flow forwards. I like this piece a lot.

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