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“If wishes were horses, the beggars would ride …”
~Anonymous~
Mr. Beggar Man
You were a gen .........
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C.J. Heck
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Sid John Gardner (11/1/2006 5:13:00 PM)
Very explicit write about the forgotten individuals we see every day.I wrote one in similar vein about a guy called 'Joe' who lived in a park in the centre of Dublin.He was a gentleman.
Regards Sid John x. |
Guo Shirong (10/20/2006 6:11:00 AM)
If you killed a beggar, you would just be like killing yourself. |
Not Long Left (10/20/2006 6:00:00 AM)
A Big hello to you too. What a nice suprise to see your name here hope all is well.
As for the poem, it is grand, the reason being is you have used great description.
In particular I very much liked the lines about the smiles..... and the opening lines that describe how he is dressed. The title also works well with the poem, as you
describe at the end that you did not know his name it pulls the it alltogether and enables it to stand way above most poems of this type.
once again nice to hear from you.
best wishes
Vincent |
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