Jennifer Rondeau

Rookie - 226 Points (03/16/90 / Seoul)

Murder Me - Poem by Jennifer Rondeau

Kill me,
Jump Me,
End my life like I care,
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Comments about Murder Me by Jennifer Rondeau

  • Is It Poetry (11/18/2016 1:07:00 AM)


    what have you done?
    a black cloud of pain as emotions disappear.
    once we were together in innocence,
    wide-eyed and untainted,
    but your thirst drifted away.
    a painful fever of agony -
    tears follow darkness, follow rain,
    love ground to dust.
    in a storm of righteousness,
    i see you in your dream's
    while I'm
    awake and you can't screen.. iip
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  • (11/6/2016 2:59:00 PM)


    do you need someone to talk to? (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (3/15/2015 1:28:00 AM)


    A desperate but truthful voice of one who cannot silence the skeptics and therefore, craving for death. This is an emotional entreat. Great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Abekah Emmanuel (10/26/2014 3:17:00 PM)


    I do like this poem too because of its unique style. However, I am not getting clearly the message you wish to communicate. Indeed, we all go through such times as you are going through this poem, but there is no action without a reason. To tell someone to end your life is very critical and one cannot take such a bold decision without any reason in mind. Therefore, I would prefer you, at least, gave us a clue of why you are taking this rather odd decision. Good poem though! (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2012 7:43:00 AM)


    Its so simple but the story behind it seems so complicated. I luv it! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/12/2012 12:23:00 PM)


    I love it! It's so relatable for me (Report) Reply

  • (5/13/2012 2:04:00 AM)


    gurl anit no man worth losing your life, but good poem (Report) Reply

  • (11/29/2009 10:40:00 PM)


    if u die like that u would go to hell and i think that murder is wrong but still good poem! (Report) Reply

  • (3/7/2009 3:39:00 PM)


    i really do like your poem, (Report) Reply

  • (12/9/2008 8:41:00 AM)


    best freaking poem i have read all day (Report) Reply

  • (4/3/2008 7:57:00 PM)


    That was awesome. good job (Report) Reply

  • (1/31/2007 6:29:00 PM)


    hey gurl, i noe how u feel b/c i was just like dat wen i got mad 2 another preson 4 no f* reason! (Report) Reply

  • (11/23/2006 10:46:00 AM)


    i no how u feel but murder isent the answer. (Report) Reply

  • (9/16/2006 3:21:00 PM)


    i have felt like this before. i like your poems. (Report) Reply










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