Muse Of A Thousand Words Poem by Alyssa Rieper
Muse Of A Thousand Words
There is beauty in your colored words
Ours are black and white
When everything is tied in twos
It lasts just through the night
Labels drawn down your arms
When they wrap around my back
Visons blind our distracted minds
These words are just an act
But our shoes are looped in promises
Tounges weaving through the mess
We choose to let go of it
And kiss away the rest
The world seems as if your dream
And you still feel you don’t belong
Muse of a thousand words
But the tounges are tied in song
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4/25/2024 11:21:35 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Great phrase 'colored words' The first 2 lines don't fit with the others, though. I suggest excising the first two lines and starting over. I hesitated in this suggestion at first, then realized the remaing lines stand better on their own than as the lines following the first two. I hope this makes sense. Here: ' When everything is tied in twos It lasts just through the night Labels drawn down your arms When they wrap around my back Visons blind our distracted minds These words are just an act But our shoes are looped in promises Tounges weaving through the mess We choose to let go of it And kiss away the rest The world seems as if your dream And you still feel you don’t belong Muse of a thousand words But the tounges are tied in song' See what I mean? (Possible title 'Tied in Twos') My best, John L.